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This is :iconmugenginga:'s OC for pokemon, which she is planning on using for PCBC@ when it happens. We've also been RPGing pokemon with our OCs and having a great time. Her Mismagius is a pain in the butt.
I actually plan to colour this when I finish tidying up the lines on the sketch, using acrylic pencils, which is unusual for me as colour and I don't usually get along. All the digital colouring I've been doing is making me braver. So keep eyes peeled for coloured Prue!
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*MugenGinga Aug 12, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
As per your permission, I'm gonna try to critque this. :3

You did a good job on making the clothes realistic. I'm bad at clothes. Her vest fits more naturally than I seem to be able to draw it.

I think they eyes are a little large. I understand the "Big Eyes, Small Mouth" style, but they seem to stick off the side of the head a bit much. I could be misinterperting the eyelashes. I think you may have focused on the upper eyelids too much. It makes it look like she's wearing eyeshadow. The pants seem a little tight. The pose you have her in should show her left ear, but I'm guilty of doing that too.

But there are some areas you did really really good on. The foreshortening of the closer shoe is excellent, and you did a great job with the way the back shoe was bent. You drew the tucked in shirt well.

A few comments in relation to Prue's design, though. She doesn't tend to tuck her shirt in and her pants aren't jeans (if I gave that impression, I apologize). Her bangs tend to be fuller, as well.
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~Cathto Aug 13, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I did over exaggerate the eyes a bit. And I do cheat things, like ears and such. I need to work on my eyes.
Thanks for the advice on the clothing. I may draw another one more closely following your design brief.
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*MugenGinga Aug 13, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Don't feel like you have to. :3

No problem.
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~Cathto Aug 13, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
not have to, but want to.
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*MugenGinga Aug 13, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Okay. :3
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*MugenGinga Aug 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yay, gift art. XD

You think Chao's giving YOU troubles? SHe totally yanked down the pants of a male character in a crossover RPG I'm in. XD

If I had to say anything its that she's a touch too chubby, but that might be your style. :3 Great job on the foot foreshortening, tough. :D
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~Cathto Aug 10, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I thought she was supposed to be a little chubbier than your average anime girl. Oh well, never mind. I think she's cute anyway. Thanks about the feet. Feet always bother me.
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*MugenGinga Aug 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's okay. X3 I've shifted her descriptions a few times, you may have been caught with an older one. XD

Oh, awesome then!
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~Cathto Aug 11, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So what is she supposed to be like?
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*MugenGinga Aug 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
[link]

Near the top, the section labeled "approximate weight". ;)
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